I can feel your shovels
They shine
In the darkness;
A darkness so black
You cant see
Anything beautiful.
And the sharp,
Metal edges of them
Jab into the hard surface
Like a jackhammer
Crushing solid stone.
You smile
As the tears
Run down your face
Almost as if
To avoid your eyes
Like I am.
You recognize the hole you made.
You cant stop digging,
The hole
Becomes so big
It could hold an ocean of rain,
Like the rain
That falls
From my cheeks.
White sand
Becomes dark mud;
The blood
Beating in my broken heart.
The rain falls hard
On your beaten back
So hard you can feel
The redness swell.
You suddenly want to stop;
Stop digging, stop wanting.
But the hole swallows you
In its entirety.
No hope is left.
But way off
In the distance,
You can hear me
Calling you,
I'm screaming for you
So loud
The universe can hear me.
You hold your hands up
At that moment,
To no sun;
no sky.
And when you
Scream back,
Only the thunder
Can hear you.
Justine Zingg
5/16/03
I really like your shovel imagery here. You might even want to consider incorporating more shovel metaphors into the poem.
typo:
"You cant stop digging," should be "can't"