TEARS OF MINE
DROWNING ME SO
DROWNING ME IN PAIN AND SORROW
I'VE HIT THE BOTTOM
A DARK AND LONELY GRAVE
COLD AND WET
I'M ALL ALONE NOW
MY SOUL CRIES OUT
AM I LOST
CAN I BE SAVED
I CAN'T STOP CRYING
I AM DYING
MY TEARS HAVE STOPPED NOW
BUT IT'S TO LATE...
I'M GONE
hiya...you commented a while ago on my poems (thank you :D) so i decided to have a flick through yours...now that i have the time lol...and from what i have seen so far, its great, i lurrrve. I especially like this one, im not sure what it is about it, maybe its the caps? lol...it just seems quite powerful...and something i can relate to.
Will keep on looking and will be sure to keep checking for new ones...:)
(btw...iv added a few more too)
take care xxx