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              A tear for you

              A tear for me

              Tears of tears

            That drown the sea



             One tear drops

           Another one falls

          They pour like rain

         On the rooftops walls



    A single tear can make a puddle

     That puddle can make a stream

      A stream can make a river

      One river can make a lake

      One lake can make an ocean

      And one ocean makes a sea



       ISN'T IT GOOD TO CRY?

  

Author's Notes/Comments: 

this piece was written while it was raining but i never finished it until now and i know its kindave weird but oh well....

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©22 August 2003 - 7:19pm — hiddenpoetess000
23 June 2004 - 8:25am — shilah_sylvester
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I like this poem its unique...your a great poet...

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16 July 2005 - 6:25am — poetvg
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i can relate to
pain like this to :*( .

23 October 2004 - 6:14am — Ruth Lovejoy (not verified)
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great concept!