Waiting
for you to come
walking the streets of life
searching the canyons of my mind
the ill winds of life have kept you from me
the winds blew many times before
sometimes I feel you near
with fortitude
waiting.
(c) copyright heather burns
syllable count
2 4 6 8 10 8 6 4 2
Waiting
Very lovely Rictameter Heather, Enjoyed it I love Roctameters.
Blessings
Elizabeth
Elizabeth Dandy
WAITING
Hi Elizabeth, my birth name is Elizabeth. How nice to meet you.
Thank you for your nice comment. I have been editing, and
making a few changes in this poem. I do this often. I also
like Rictameter very much. Something a little different. I am
going to write more in this form. I am very busy and don't have
much time to read others work, but I do enjoy your work.
have a great day. your riend, heather USA
waitingt
I am derlighted to hear your second name is Elizabeth. and that you also like Rictameters. I have quite a few, some naughty ones too. I see that you have a hughe portrfolio. Real busy poet. God bless you.
Love and peace
lEizabeth
Elizabeth Dandy