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ERATO--GODDESS OF LOVE

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When
my
pen
is
idle.

Paper
yellow
with
age.

I
can
no
longer
script.

My
mind
is
in
a
haze.

Oh Erato,
Goddess
of
love.

Be
kind,
please
fill
my page.

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©9 December 2011 - 10:40am — heatherburns35
29 December 2011 - 9:03am — SSmoothie
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Simply elegant and all the

Simply elegant and all the more gorgeous for it <3

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

29 December 2011 - 10:01am — heatherburns35
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Erato

thanks so much for reading and your comment.
I appreciate it hbw

29 December 2011 - 8:08am — Beavis
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Nice!

Well done and I like the layout of the text. It gives the feel of poet who has been at the page, almost suspended in time, offering up a poet's prayer.

29 December 2011 - 8:55am — heatherburns35
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Erato

thanks so much for your lovely comment.
I appreciate it. hbw

14 December 2011 - 9:52am — shazi
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Superb

Hi Heather, it is amazing, your ability to convert something so simple to such a readable poem. It is nicely written. Loved it

17 December 2011 - 10:05pm — heatherburns35
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Erato

Thanks a lot for your nice comment Shazi.
I appreciate it much. hbw

13 December 2011 - 12:27am — poet610
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Wonderful

Hi HB, this is a wonderful piece, Very creative piece.
keep up the great penning
610

17 December 2011 - 10:05pm — heatherburns35
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poem

Thanks for the nice comment 610.
I appreciate it very much. hbw