ERATO--GODDESS OF LOVE

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FOLDER 2011

When
my
pen
is
idle.

Paper
yellow
with
age.

I
can
no
longer
script.

My
mind
is
in
a
haze.

Oh Erato,
Goddess
of
love.

Be
kind,
please
fill
my page.

copyright  by heather burns 2011

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SSmoothie's picture

Simply elegant and all the

Simply elegant and all the more gorgeous for it <3


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

heatherburns35's picture

Erato

thanks so much for reading and your comment.
I appreciate it hbw

Beavis's picture

Nice!

Well done and I like the layout of the text. It gives the feel of poet who has been at the page, almost suspended in time, offering up a poet's prayer.

heatherburns35's picture

Erato

thanks so much for your lovely comment.
I appreciate it. hbw

shazi's picture

Superb

Hi Heather, it is amazing, your ability to convert something so simple to such a readable poem. It is nicely written. Loved it

heatherburns35's picture

Erato

Thanks a lot for your nice comment Shazi.
I appreciate it much. hbw

poet610's picture

Wonderful

Hi HB, this is a wonderful piece, Very creative piece.
keep up the great penning
610

heatherburns35's picture

poem

Thanks for the nice comment 610.
I appreciate it very much. hbw