YOU SPREAD THE PAINT

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You
presented
a lovely
picture.

 

Brush
strokes
so
delicate.

 

Hearts
in
complete
a tune.

 

A
beautiful
scene
indeed.

 

But
there
were
flaws
on your
canvas.

 

For
some
reason
you
could
not
adjust.

 

Shading
continued
in
different
colors.

 

Changing
the
picture
often.

 The
canvas
wearing.

 

Although
you
tried
several
times.

 

The
outcome
remained
the
same.

 

You
spread
the
paint
too
thin.

 copyright by heather burns

Author's Notes/Comments: 

you spread the paint too thin.

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As an artist

This is very close to artists' block! I really enjoyed the lines and the theme and the ideas lovely work heather! Cheers SS


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poem

Thanks for reading amd commenting SSmoothie.