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A GEM
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FIELDS OF HEATHER Running through a meadow green,
On a summer day,
I thought I saw a little child,
Just beginning play.
But as I looked again, I saw
a bright and shining gem,
A ray of light from the sun,
Seemed to encircle him.
A moonbeam caught in his hair,
Made it shine so bright.
Stars were used for his little
eyes, so he could see the
light.
A little gem needs guidance,
As he continues play,
A gentle voice, a loving smile,
Will help him on his way.
copyright by heather burns
let me say again and again the same words from the core of my heart that..love the logics expressed in this poem with a good idea.. I went through few of your poems and loved them too..you are good poetess and hope you never stop writing and add more poems.. this poem is good and love it..hope you like my poems too.. and let me know if they also touch your heart.. I am basically a peace wisher poet with 6 books published... I am a peace dreamer, love-based peace promoter... hope you be with me... let me share here one of my own famous say with you... ( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with..afzal shauq )
Nice poem, I'd correct some spelling errors though--notably "thru"..it is spelled "through"
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thanks for advice. I'll be more careful next time and edit my work.