Whispering promises, is easy to
do,
Many times, they never come
true.
The one whispering promises,
Is not sincere.
Playing make-believe with
your ear.
Lots of voices, hum a tune
Whispering promises forgotten
soon
Truth is absent, from the start,
A game of words, played with a
heart.
Lying tongues have a cruel
bite,
Whispered promises, in the
night.
(c) copyright heather burns
I also love this poem....I love the line "cruel bite". I love your poetry it's really good.
sooo romantic one... wow, its knocking the door of my heart and says ..hello shauq.. miss you to talk.. yeah I realize like it..the whispering way is really very loving way and like it... when two talks ear to ear ..and exchange love ... love this poem very much
To be honest i've always felt
To be honest i've always felt rhyming poems were too .. hmm in a word.. invalid. But yours is very very appealing to me. I love it.