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SOUNDS OF LONELINESS
Sitting in the darkness,
soft sounds in the background,
sounds of music from a distant place,
voices singing of love and happiness
singing of broken hearts and hurt feelings.
Misunderstandings played out in front of everyone.
Keys tapped by fingers looking for a way,
feelings, thoughts, emotions and passions
all needing to be expressed in some new and unique way.
It is ironic that when one is in there zone
the music they make with the keys of some computer key board.
Sitting in the dark, searching for the way to get a message across.
Looking for words that paint a picture, of love and hate.
Lost souls looking for some stability in their world.
For silence to be golden, then don't you think sounds should be as good?
Although this is about loneliness...and is quite touching...somehow I can not imagine you being lonely. It's this "Re'nee" image I have of a strong woman with many friends, aquaintances and relatives.
I really like this poem. You worded it wonderfully. You are very talented. I hope you write many more. Feel free to check out mine, but be warned they are a bit graphic.
I've just reached some stability in this world! Helps to your poem! If got time please read my stuff & listen to my music! Thank U in advance!
Hi Renee Hmmm, sounds of lonliness!!! It can be one of the most peaceful times to enjoy. This was wonderfully expressed here in this poem. Great read! Roz :)
Wonderfully written! Way to go!
Renee, I love this! It's so true of anyone trying to express something. The last two lines are fantastic, and I'm jealous because I wish I'd written them myself.
ALSO IT'S THE POEM MANY WOULD OF LOVED TO WRITE !
HELL~EAT OUT,DON'T STOP WRITING TODAY GS HERE DEAR L&P
Absolutely beautiful. We, as regulars, see so much of this expressed in the poetry submitted here. Thank you for such a wonderful piece. Amy
Gentle is the night♥