HOT SOUP

When I was a little girl

with hair that would never curl

I dreamed of being in a dance troupe

never eating anything but hot soup.



When I was a girl of teenage

my picture was on the newpaper front page

I was in a cool melodrama play

even then hot soup would make my day.



I am a woman that is older now

hot soup is still my favorite chow

I can eat it when nothing else sounds good

I think I eat it more than I should.



So Tim as you can tell I love this stuff

makes me feel like a little warm powderpuff

this was the greatest title you have ever given me

give me another one so I can test my ability.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

another challenge from TIM...

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Miranda Rae's picture

Mmmmmmmm Mmmmmmmmmmm Good! Now if you'll excuse me I'm gonna fix me a bowl of Campbell's Fiesta Chili Beef (with extras that I like to throw in......a whole can of extra kidney beans, diced tomato, and diced onions)

Roz Turner's picture

Hi Renee This was a cute poem to read! Liked it alot! Roz :)

W. B.'s picture

Excellant! I know what I am having for lunch today! Yesterday I had clam chowder (New England) Today I will go for chicken & rice. Check out Jimmy Buffet's "I Will Play For Gumbo" on his "Beachouse On The Moon" album: "It's a little like religion and a lot like sex You should never know when you're gonna get it next"

Melvin  Lee's picture

HAhah.... nice ditty poem...Cute. And yah.i love mushroom soup~!!!!!...Yummy..with garlic or cheese bread..Slurp.. Smilesz.

Deborah E Russell's picture

Avast me mate, pass me a cup... hot soup in a cup can really fill me up if i had my own way id eat it everyday lentil, chicken and gumbo too, there is nothin quite as good for you... Thanks Renee' nobody asked me to play...but lol that's life!!!

Tim Marshall's picture

DON'T BURN YOUR TOUNG VERY GOOD,AND SOMETHING YOU ENJOYED ALL YOUR LIFE SOUP ON SISTER,IT'S WARMS UP YOUR SOUL.

gentle's picture

Renee: As always, you never cease to amaze me with the ease that you use when writing about anything. I luv tomato with lots of crackers! Amy


Gentle is the night♥