CABIN BY THE RIVER

I know a sweet little place to go for a real good time.

Walk if you want to but you will be covered in dirt and grime.

You really need a four wheel drive to get to the right spot.

It is such a quite out of the way place you'll like it alot.



You can listen to the water as it splashs under the docks.

You can soak up all the sun you want when you lay out on the rocks.

I love this place it helps me when I need to spend time alone.

It is wonderful and peaceful, no other place have I ever known.



The cabin by the river is just the place that is the best.

I like to sit near the water when I am on a type of vision quest.

So should you ever find yourself looking for some where to just get away.

Take some time for just this trip, I promise, your secrets it will never betray.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

another in the personal contest with TIM...... thanks for the title...

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Roz Turner's picture

Hi Renee This sounds like such a wonderful place to go and escape the every day life! Wish I had somewhere like this to go.. but then again, I went there in vision when I read this poem. Thanks for sharing Roz :)

Tim Marshall's picture

IT'S A FEW WEEK'S LATER JUST WANTED TO READ A GOODIE BEFORE DREAM TIME HOPEFULLY I'LL GO THERE GREAT POEM

Tim Marshall's picture

BEAUTY THRU WORD'S OF VISION CLOSE YOUR EYE'S AND SMOKE IS PRAISING THE HEAVEN'S RENEE' RENEE'YOU GET DEEPER EACH DAY YOU'RE TRUELY A BEAUTIFUL PERSON INDEED

Robert  LaFountain's picture

Great poem Renee'..I believe that I have a cabin like that where I go too when the stress of the world gets to be too much. I love your poetry and hope you never let anyone dissuade you from adding to this list of poems. Your words touch my very soul and I really relate to this poem. It is where my soul longs to spend it's days. God bless and keep up the good work. Goldeneagle

Doreen Southworth's picture

could you tell me where this place it?! Just read my poem titled SCHOOL, it will explain everything!! GREAT JOB!!

Edwin Robinette's picture

Good going! I really love this one!! It's nice that we all have a place like this to go to. Love the description!!