BLOW TORCH

His breath was like a blow torch.

If I get any closer my hair it might scorch.

I hope tomorrow he remembers to brush.

Oh, and while he's in there.... please remember to flush.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This is a poem that was written as an answer to a challenge.....

Tim Marshall sent me this title.... if you have not read any of his work ... well friend.... you are missing out on a real treat....

anyway... now back to the subject at hand..... when I read this title.... well I was like.... what the .....

well I sat back.... dug in deep..... and thought oh no Mr. Marshall you will not beat this lil' ol' southern chickie.... and I gave it a whrill..... and you know.... I liked it.... and he must....he reads this more often than anyone else I know... including me....LOL...

Tim my friend.... I thank the Great Spirit every day that our paths have crossed....you are the greatest....

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