Luminous Bodies by Hannah Ang

I'll be up all night staring at them

Always looking up until my neck goes sore

But all I can do is stare

Because I'm stuck here standing on a concrete floor

Never going to grasp their bright light

I know I'll always be pulled by gravity

And so I accept my fate of never being able to take flight

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Hello be kind because I'm new to this kind of stuff. Cool

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9inety's picture

hmmm

it is very nice

to reach for the stars

but quite an achievemet to get to the top of the highest mountain too...

keep climbing

keep dreaming

keep reaching

Peace

Dylan

ps

excellent poem

keep

 writing


"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot

hannahthe_'s picture

:)

Thank you! I'll keep on writing poems then Laughing