This beautiful hell I never knew
I never had it when I was with you
I never had it when you were mine
But now it is me and you are left behind
I guess I though that the bad was not good
Silly me I though that you could
I hate you now with ever breath that?s mine
I would love to see you break down and cry
I hate you now and with ever vibe I scream
I hate you now more than anything
Hey,
this is the second time I am critiquing one of your poems...but what can I say, you have talent...you should keep up the good work...and let me know when you write something new...
Megan