More than anything

This beautiful hell I never knew

I never had it when I was with you

I never had it when you were mine

But now it is me and you are left behind

I guess I though that the bad was not good

Silly me I though that you could

I hate you now with ever breath that?s mine

I would love to see you break down and cry

I hate you now and with ever vibe I scream

I hate you now more than anything

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Megan Bailey's picture

Hey,

this is the second time I am critiquing one of your poems...but what can I say, you have talent...you should keep up the good work...and let me know when you write something new...

Megan