I drove all night to see your face,
We sat and pondered how to spend the day,
That night we got drunk,
And I carried away,
Did something I wouldn’t in the light of a new day.
When I woke up alone,
I knew it wasn’t right,
I went down stairs and cleaned from last night,
I sat on the couch to get the morning news,
You sat beside and with words abused.
You said we had to talk,
Trembling with fear,
I don’t remember what you said,
But your message I heard clear,
I said are you letting me go,
And there it was the silence that I feared.
I got off the couch and pack my things,
Put them in my truck with out words to you or me,
You asked if I wanted to talk,
And I said there was nothing to talk about,
I hugged you twice,
Then left your house.
I don’t know why it happened,
And till this day I still care,
But I had to leave the way I did,
To keep from shedding one tear.
Wow this one brought a tear to my eyes. It has such a wonderful flow and a strong impact of emotions to it. Such a wonderful write!
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oh yeah, your poem is really good too. :)
no, i'm just kidding it is a good poem, i love you oh so much! keep writing and post more on here.