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I felt like a hypocrite

"don't do this, if you do, tell me"

it's all bullshit

I trapped myself

but, now I see

comfort me

or will they hear?

torn feelings

I shed a tear

maybe i'm wrong

YOU ARE RIGHT

a big mistake that I have to hide

a fantasy always sounds so great

not the pleasure, but how you make it

waste of time

FUCKED UP ANYWAYS

stupid thought

expecting returning feelings

hiding my dreams

is what they've made me do

thinking of your biggest fantasy

A BULLSHIT LIE CAME TRUE

Author's Notes/Comments: 

ummm...i don't even remember writing this one. but i guess sometimes my thoughts are too outrageous to even remember thinking

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©8 August 2002 - 4:25am — gwennalockafer
8 September 2003 - 6:37pm — Kala Bennett (not verified)
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Hey,
Heh, feels like your reading from my heart. I feel that way, it really hits close to home. I like the way your worded it, and the ending. a bullshit lie came true.
good work keep it up
Ps. Check out my poems and critique
<3kala

19 February 2003 - 3:44am — Robin (not verified)
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like it; had 2 read a couple times

4 November 2002 - 10:07am — poetvg
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nice work on this one :*).

21 August 2002 - 4:12am — Matt Handlos (not verified)
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definitely full of your usual contradictory thoughts. all kind of just going down different paths through some dark fields and joining back up in the end to make your point come across, even though its not really clear what it may be. good stuff, ok thanks.