I felt like a hypocrite
"don't do this, if you do, tell me"
it's all bullshit
I trapped myself
but, now I see
comfort me
or will they hear?
torn feelings
I shed a tear
maybe i'm wrong
YOU ARE RIGHT
a big mistake that I have to hide
a fantasy always sounds so great
not the pleasure, but how you make it
waste of time
FUCKED UP ANYWAYS
stupid thought
expecting returning feelings
hiding my dreams
is what they've made me do
thinking of your biggest fantasy
A BULLSHIT LIE CAME TRUE
Hey,
Heh, feels like your reading from my heart. I feel that way, it really hits close to home. I like the way your worded it, and the ending. a bullshit lie came true.
good work keep it up
Ps. Check out my poems and critique
<3kala
like it; had 2 read a couple times
nice work on this one :*).
definitely full of your usual contradictory thoughts. all kind of just going down different paths through some dark fields and joining back up in the end to make your point come across, even though its not really clear what it may be. good stuff, ok thanks.