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i stay here

so what who cares

go away

no stay

believe me

okay?

just shut up

leave me alone

never could i understand

not once have you held my hand

so i'm gone

yes you are wrong

trust me

just believe

i am myself

and no one else

comfortable secret

between you and i

i love it

i'd love to cry

i see you

but you don't want to see me

although you do

you're all i want to see

leave me

bye bye

when i left you never said

goodbye

oh well

i love to cry

Author's Notes/Comments: 

written when i was 15
so i guess it is pretty naive to say you really like to cry but i'm just a smartass so who knows

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 5:44pm
©13 May 2002 - 10:16am — gwennalockafer
3 September 2002 - 9:14am — Joslyn - (not verified)
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I liked that poem a lot, it shows how confused people can really be and how feelings can mix, and when they do, confusion is what happens. I like it a lot. Take a look at my page and tell me what ya think. www.postpoems.com/members/xxcrazyeyez187xx
i really do like that poem.