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Everything is leaving but where is it going

my eyes are breaking, my soul is broken

This was the beginning but now it's gone

my life is fucking, my body is fucked

All I am is nothing, where do I start

my mind is forgetting, my love is forgotten

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 5:44pm
©11 May 2002 - 1:35pm — gwennalockafer
28 June 2003 - 12:32am — Jeff Trethewey (not verified)
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I love the poem. Good word flow. Deep meaning. It's great.

30 September 2002 - 5:58am — Nicole A. (not verified)
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I think this one is my favorite of yours..so far

11 May 2002 - 1:59pm — Matt Handlos (not verified)
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nice word usage here. i like the whole... "eyes are breaking" thing. eyes are fragile and easily broken open into tears. great shit, i like it