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Instant thoughts If I had lied to you, would you even care?
If I would leave today, would you be scared?
If I had even loved, would have you loved me back?
If I said I hated you, would you be sad?
If I looked in your eyes, would you see through mine?
If I wanted you often, would you want me all the time?
If I searched into your soul, would you look deep into my mind?
If I wanted to stand beside you, would you leave me a step behind?
If I tried to find your distance, would you even understand?
If I reached out for you, would you grab my hand?
If I needed someone there, would you be my very friend?
If I needed you to care, would love be what you'd send?
good one jenny
you go girl it feels good :*)
to express your feelings
i do it all the time it o:*D
takes stress off of you .
makes your life feel so :*b
much better . im so gald
you wrote this poem it was :*s
meant to be wrote keep up
all the amazing work in the future.
Very Well Written, seemed to know exactly what she wanted to say...gets to the point...very good use of expression of feelings....Keep writing you will only get better!
THIS POEM IS VERY WELL WRITTEN. SAYS EXACTLY WHAT IT MEANS WITHOUT CONTRADICTION. KEEP IT UP.