To move beyond haiku

we will graduate

seven syllable second

to find a tanka

written in five lines like this

with final line as seven

 

 

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Revisiting this, I find it

Revisiting this, I find it just as beautiful.


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thank you!

I appreciate being reintroduced to it too


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And I am glad to see you

And I am glad to see you back,


Januarian (in Chrismation, Januarius)

fka Starward*Led

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I like this explication of

I like this explication of the Tanka/Kyoka format.


Januarian (in Chrismation, Januarius)

fka Starward*Led

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Thank you

Appreciating your comment. Thank you!


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