Punishing whispers

We never stopped loving

Although, we were 

Forced into distance

We love you always

All ways

We tear as we walk

Without you

Hands cold

Wanting the touch

We never stopped loving

We never did stop

Just distanced

As stars

Crossed

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I am starting to run out of

I am starting to run out of ways to praise your beautiful poetry.  This is one of your best . . . especially the last two lines and the implied pause between them.


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Big toothy grin

Pretty sure this comment just made my day! :) thank you!!


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And thank you, for sharing

And thank you, for sharing your fine poetry with us on postpoems.  


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