This is a song I wrote for a book I've been writing. I couldn't really think of a proper title to give it, so for now I call it "The Lullaby".
Beautiful imagery, and i can see it as a song too
My mother was a rainbow
My father turned her grey
they loved me like a sky lantern
they watched me fly away
The repetition of the long O sound is well deployed and gives a structural unity to the poem. This is splendid work.
Starward
thank you very much
Beautiful imagery, and i can
Beautiful imagery, and i can see it as a song too
My mother was a rainbow
My father turned her grey
they loved me like a sky lantern
they watched me fly away
Exquisitely beautiful
The repetition of the long O sound is well deployed and gives a structural unity to the poem. This is splendid work.
Starward
thank you very much
thank you very much