dear beautiful,
ur the ideal of perfection
ur too great for ryhming schemes or sappy words
but i will tell u....
u mean so much to me
i feel u help me see,
the life i could possibly hold
if i were only so bold
to ask u what u feel
or told u i couldn't deal
without u being part of bill
how u could fill
a void in my life
if only u were my wife
the second u leave a room
i already miss u
u swept my heart with ur life's broom
u take away all that is blu
the bad is sudddenly gone
i loose all track of time with u
i would hold u until dawn
i have no need for suttleties
not even whats up g?
because if i ask u, the casualties,
would equal u askin me
i couldn't tell the truth to u
not even if i try
the memory of my luv to u
could almost make me cry
so in the future i hope ull learn to luv
a person who ain't to great with life
i just wish u opened up ur heart
and sumday be my wife.......
Bill, i like this.
this poem is incredibly sweet...well done!
angela grimaldi