Thinking Of....
A hollow moment?
Perhaps....
When your pulse,
Misses a beat!
And your brain....
pauses.
So your heart, fills......
With a void.
And reflections, pass.....
From mirror, to
Memories.
And a silent longing,
Overcomes .....
You.
Giajl © Jim Love
Peronsally, I loved this
Peronsally, I loved this poem. The momentary pauses really built tension inside me and added suspense to your final work. Great job!
Thanks
Yeah each word each line
thanks for taking the time to read
Paratrooper's don't die........ they go to Hell and regroup!!!