Thinking Of.....

Thinking Of....

A hollow moment?
Perhaps.... 
When your pulse,
Misses a beat!
And your brain....
pauses.
So your heart, fills......
With a void.
And reflections, pass.....
From mirror, to
Memories.
And a silent longing,
Overcomes .....

You.
Giajl © Jim Love 
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caltimuslk's picture

Peronsally, I loved this

Peronsally, I loved this poem. The momentary pauses really built tension inside me and added suspense to your final work. Great job!

giajl's picture

Thanks

Yeah each word each line 

thanks for taking the time to read


Paratrooper's don't die........ they go to Hell and regroup!!!