Saltburn, A Lifetime Ago, A
Walk on North Sea sands.
I stopped ...,
I looked, and stared,
in wonderment.
Of how, lucky.....I could be!
Never thinking, it wouldn't last.
A moment, in time,
etched..... forever,
in my mind.
I savour it, even now.
But it brings a hurt.
Of sweetness, now gone..... sour.
Of a love, that stood between.
Me, and the sea.
On hill, in .....
A
Northern town.
Giajl © Jim Love
Nice Versification
A telling worthy of the moment - and the loss. Great penning, love the structure and the descent in tone. Well said, well received giajl. - Lady A -