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Should I Stay,or Should
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August 2016 Should I Stay, or Should
As much, as.
I love, my brothers.
I miss, the real world !
And all, that it brings.
I miss, the warmth, of a ...... woman.
Of, conversations, with the living.
Of another's, touch.
When the fluttering, of wings,
Signal, it's my time......
Age, only being a number on a page.
Perhaps it's....
Time, to write a new chapter.
A new, beginning....?
I hope, I find, a new love...
Before
I go.....
Giajl © Jim Love
I hope
you find love too. a nice write!
forget age! no matters!
Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....
Words
Great message! Loved the
Great message! Loved the "age, only being a number on a page" although (if I may) "being" feels out of place... maybe just 'age is a number on a page'? Either way, great line! I'll remember it...
"I have become a second generation cosmic being, I am conceived in the womb of nature, in my own mind... In the womb of the universe."