Now In Peace

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November 2015

Now In Peace

 

They march..... with....

Forlorn crosses.

With paper flowers, that don't grow !

Placed, upon the ground.

Row .....on .....row.

Like, little ......black eyes... that.

Do not, see .... nor no longer,

Weep.

Silently......

Here we lie, below.

Eternally ......

we 

 

Sleep.

Giajl © Jim Love 

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CreativeWriterE's picture

Your writing is good, but why

Your writing is good, but why do most or all of your lines have that "...." in it ? 


You've gotta pass hell to get to heaven..

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Valhalla

Paratroopers don't die.....

they go to Hell....

and Re-Group 


Paratrooper's don't die........ they go to Hell and regroup!!!