Now In Peace
They march..... with....
Forlorn crosses.
With paper flowers, that don't grow !
Placed, upon the ground.
Row .....on .....row.
Like, little ......black eyes... that.
Do not, see .... nor no longer,
Weep.
Silently......
Here we lie, below.
Eternally ......
we
Sleep.
Giajl © Jim Love
Your writing is good, but why
Your writing is good, but why do most or all of your lines have that "...." in it ?
You've gotta pass hell to get to heaven..
Valhalla
Paratroopers don't die.....
they go to Hell....
and Re-Group
Paratrooper's don't die........ they go to Hell and regroup!!!