Brick by Brick

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I wasn’t always this guarded;
other people built my wall
brick by brick.

It’s been cemented with tears,
bonded by years
of broken trust.

Every time I try to remove a layer,
they only replace it
and make the wall higher.

Now it’s impenetrable,
a fortress over my heart.

No one can tear me down;
they may chip away at me,
but they only scratch the facade.

I am a stronghold of secrets,
secured by shattered hopes
and unrequited love.

I can only wish that
someday someone
will deconstruct my wall
brick by brick.

Rewrite

I wasn’t always this guarded;
other people built my wall
brick by brick.

It’s been cemented with tears,
bonded by years
of broken trust.

Every time I try to remove a layer,
they only replace it
and make the wall higher.

Now it’s impenetrable,
a fortress over my heart.

No one can tear me down;
they may chip away at me,
but they only scratch the facade.

I am a stronghold of secrets,
secured by shattered hopes
and unrequited love.

I can only wish that
someday someone
will deconstruct my wall…

brick by brick.

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