Comet

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I orbited around the sun,

too close I burned myself

leaving me in a coma

at the tail end of life.



My debris sprinkled along

your once-undisrupted path

creating meteor showers

in your heart’s atmosphere.



Cloudy condensation fell

from your solar eyes~

a global freezing of love

cooling a temperate earth.

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