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The battered batter

was mixed with

precise strokes,

incisions rolled into

each other so

they are no longer

visible to the victim.



He licks the specks

of blood off

his bruised knuckles

before they bake on

while she lets

her tears cake on

beaten cheeks.



The doe-eyed dough

swears the abuse

is meant to make

her better than

what she now is

through the assaults

of an angry whisk.



He crams her

malleable imperfections

into pastry molds,

calling her special

but treating her like

she is ordinary, simply

another of his conquests.



Maybe she thinks

it is her just desserts.

Rewrite 2012

The battered batter
was mixed with
precise strokes,
incisions rolled into
each other so
they are no longer
visible to the victim.

He licked the specks
of blood off
his bruised knuckles
before they baked on
while she let
her tears cake on
beaten cheeks.

The doe-eyed dough
swore the abuse
was meant to make
her better than
what she was now
through the assaults
of an angry whisk.

He crammed her
malleable imperfections
into pastry molds,
calling her special
but treating her like
she is ordinary, simply
another of his conquests.

Maybe she thinks
it is her just desserts.

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