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General Love You know you are
Throwing your purity
Down the drain,
But you’ve let
These lust-filled waves
Envelop you
Until they flood
Your thoughts.
And the only thing
You dream about
Is the sound
Of waterfalls.
Don’t you hear
The faucet running?
Are you going to
Turn it off
Before it drowns you?
Great work! Very smooth, and the image of dreaming about waterfalls is particularly intriguing.
Also, I love the open-ended finish/question. Keep it up.