Predatory

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You nibbled on my neck,

venomous kisses

subduing me

as you claimed me

your prey for tonight.



Your slithering tongue

scaled its way

down my body while

hands moved

in serpentine strokes.



You gripped folds

of my slickest skin

with lust-fangs,

but became rattled

when I took control.



Creeping up, I drew in

your entire length

deep within me,

swallowing your

writhing form whole.

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You nibbled on my neck,
venomous kisses
subduing me
as you claimed me
your prey for tonight.

Your slithering tongue
scaled its way
down my body while
hands moved
in serpentine strokes.

You gripped folds
of my slickest skin
with lust-fangs,
but became rattled
when I took control.

Creeping up, I drew in
your entire length
deep within me,
swallowing your
writhing form whole.

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