You nibbled on my neck,
venomous kisses
subduing me
as you claimed me
your prey for tonight.
Your slithering tongue
scaled its way
down my body while
hands moved
in serpentine strokes.
You gripped folds
of my slickest skin
with lust-fangs,
but became rattled
when I took control.
Creeping up, I drew in
your entire length
deep within me,
swallowing your
writhing form whole.
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You nibbled on my neck,
venomous kisses
subduing me
as you claimed me
your prey for tonight.
Your slithering tongue
scaled its way
down my body while
hands moved
in serpentine strokes.
You gripped folds
of my slickest skin
with lust-fangs,
but became rattled
when I took control.
Creeping up, I drew in
your entire length
deep within me,
swallowing your
writhing form whole.