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i am very cold

and the sun

tried and tried

but ............

i am tired

i toss

i turn

i sleep

no dreams

no thoughts

tossing

cold

no warmth

no......

just dead cold

blue

dawn pink

gold

opening clouds

cold oh so cold

i wake

dead night

cold freezing

so sad

so so sad

still cold

still cold

so cold

g

21 2 2001

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©29 October 2001 - 7:03pm — geylan
28 March 2002 - 5:00pm — AKMAL (not verified)
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You're so sad, so weak, so cold ..... is it an epilogue ? ... is it the conclusion of a life dream ?!!
Another beautiful " piece of mind ".

30 October 2001 - 7:03pm — Mona Omar (not verified)
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it is realy cold and sad for all of us now but we can dream of sun shinning again :) soon i.s.a.

30 October 2001 - 7:03pm — Eric Cockrell (not verified)
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extreme sadness, lonliness... an ending here. another very good poem. eric