RITE OF PASSAGE

 

 

Rite of passage

I’ll learn

if I listen

 

the winds tease wisdom

as bird songs beckon hope

 

 

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Very succinct write but a lot packed in a small space.

Great write.  --  Stephen

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grazie,  I like to play

grazie,  I like to play around with Tanshi in general.  I am not a purist for haiku, tanka, senryu, kyoga etc but I try to respect the traditions.