DREAMS TRANSPIRE

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SLEEPY TIME POEMS

 

Dreams transpire

in nodded visions

dashing

before

elucidated lights

that flash

echoed catcalls

of dream-thoughts

reverberating

thru

subconscious fantasies

of a world

actually

gone right

 

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very nice.  

very nice.

 

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i had to read it ten more

i had to read it ten more times in rapid succession... and now i really like it.

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thank you.  glad you enjoyed

thank you.  glad you enjoyed it

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“A world...gone right”

.

A good place too start a poetry career; a poetically correct world. :D

 



Onyamaichi

 

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we would like to think

we would like to think