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mother night
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Fantasy & Adventure The Plea
Mother Night, embrace me
With consummate darkness.
Wrap me in your womb of velvety illusion.
Release your compassions to a soul lost of love.
Entwined in deep shadows, trapped in ebony's caress,
No more dare I feel warmth from sweet earth and the sun,
No rainbows, no sparrows, no fair light from above.
The Vow
Mother Night, consume me
And never will I flee.
If your lips taste my throat, I know I shall fly!
I will lay waste my heart to cast blood to your moon.
The wise wolves of your forests will worship with me.
In the blink and the flash of a butterfly's eye,
My life, my soul, my mind will be in yours soon.
The Submission
Mother Night, comfort me.
Dispell the sands of time
Where no flesh of man - beast is dry - ravaged again.
Release me forever to your infinite stars.
Dark ravens, in holy choir, will sing out the rhyme
To raise your cool waters for this daughter of Cain.
Let the stars be my path and my palace, be Mars.
Interesting style and format. It really does wonders for your work. It may be my favorite because it supports your personality trait of being unique, free, beautiful, bold, and brilliant.
HI~ caught ya in post poem pond,take 2 even more beautiful (GREAT ONE) L&P
amy this is soooooo beautiful
Very nice Amy. Great title!
HI,Beautiful poem + A real GEM,thank you
A beautiful poem with a dream like quality.I like the power in your expression. best wishes Meena
Great imagery mind picture! I love this one! Beautiful!
this daughter of Cain beautiful choice of wording....
Very nicely done...a tribute to enmeshed concepts. Nice presentation and enjoyed your use of metaphores...effective! Thanks for sharing your talent... deborah
Very broad in its feeling of openess to what is often used in a negative way: The Night. Shows capacity for change, willingness to accept a larger design. Esp. liked the lines about worshiping with the wolves.
Hiya Mother night... what a wonderful subject to write about. You capture this so well with your poetic words, which is simply outstanding. Great work and such a wonderful read. Have a nice day Roz :)
Hey! Great! I've got a Mother Night, too. lol Very nice writing.
your depth in this one was just wonderful... I truly liked it... mother night... what a great subject for a poem... thank you once again for sharing this one with us.... Renee'... you are amazing...
What a tribute to the mysterious beautiful night, Amy! I was lost in this one...
ONce again Amy...u astound me with ur superb use of words and imagery...u re really really good at conjuring up mental sceneries thru ur simple yet effective words. This can be one of the best night poems i ever read....thanxs for sharing with us Amy.... do post more! U have GREAT talents!