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THRU PERIPHERAL VISION

 

I see a yellow robin

                         peckin’ away

       in

         the

            trees.

 

It doesn’t make

             any

                 sense.

 

 

 

A yellow robin

pecking away in the trees.

It doesn’t make sense

 

I

see a

yellow robin pecking

away in the trees

It doesn’t make any sense

 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

The first piece is the original poem I wrote back in the late 1980's.  I also included the edited haiku and fiverse versions of this poem that were edited later on.


THRU PERIPHERAL VISION: Schaefer, George F: 9798790939471: Amazon.com: Books

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©3 October 2018 - 12:54am — georgeschaefer
4 October 2018 - 12:41am — allets
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A few words

...about poets who see yellow robins. This is intersting. See, a few words. :) slc

 

 

4 October 2018 - 12:57am — georgeschaefer
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and it still doesn't make any

and it still doesn't make any sense.