I sit, reliving the day
Of us together
Walking, talking, sharing our time
Our first time together
Will it be our last?
I sit here wondering, about the night
We spent together
Getting to know each other
For the first time face to face
What did you feel?
I sit here, with so many questions
What went through your mind?
Was it good, or bad?
What do you see in me?
Who am I to you?
I sit here thinking, of when we meet next
Will things be different?
Or is something blossoming?
Do our futures have us together, or apart?
Will we ever meet again?
I sit here, so much on my mind
Of our time
Together...
This is absolutely GREAT! Speaks of two things to me: A wanting to love and be loved which brings with it a deep sense of vulnerability. Keep on loving, living and writing.
i really like this poem it descirbes my day basically when i had first met my boyfriend. you write with alot of emotion and i enjoy it... keep writing
~* Holli *~