Testing the waters, and left on the beach
A hand's length away, yet far out of reach.
Prose of a girl, who tries to engrain
pools of water
poured down the drain
Dripping and dropping, soak into the earth
Pebbles of skepticism give birth.
Masts on a ship of tears unfurl.
What am I, your whipping girl?
Smoking and choking and soaking in sweat
Climb out of your heart, of your untimely threat.
Kicking and screaming, and down with the fight,
Whipping girls don't have that right.
Your punishment's mine, bent me over your knee,while
spitting and hitting, and quitting on me
I'm left with the bruises, and scrapes and welts
You never even cared how it felt.
So, sitting alone in the dark, in the night
whipping my heart in my self centered spite
I lay this on you, with your arrogant face
with your mind off my need for you here in my space
with your silence and pride being so out of place
with your whipping girl locked in her case
ripping and tearing the beautiful lace......
Of her heart
of her skin
Of her stoic silence within
Masquerading the hurt, and the ache, and the shame
Masking the rightful prince that's to blame
Terrified of losing the flame
This is the whipping girl's game.
I can relate.......very nice
I can relate.......very nice write.
This poem
lives in its lyrical and delicate craftsmanship. Viewed in its entirety, I see a chronicle of young woman's emotional development through disillusionment. Most memories are intricate and echo in our minds for what seems like a lifetime. While we seek a way dispose of the bad ones and revel in good ones. Poetry writing can help with depths of the falling and push the bad memories into relative insignificance, leaving a new page to scribe upon. I encourage you to use the positive release of writing to express all that your muse may encounter. And I hope that you find inner serenity.
Peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot