new American dream

I have an old fashion dream. No greater life then life with a loving family. Its what I always really wanted for me. To provide and protect my wife and the life her and I can bring. The gift to be a husband and father seems more like a fantasy. Too many dirty girls running up and down our streets. Then all the douchebags needing a new ass nightly to spread his seed. Lack of thoughtful people only filled with greed. Why waste time to lend a hand when I have so many needs. Thats the thinking that got us here and here is no place to be. Cut the trees build your own luxury an evolution of an American dream.

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Theres a lot to say for a good family life, I think your poem explains well the pressures your family life is threatened by. With your abililty to write so well and to perceive these emotions, I am sure your family life will remain strong. Your poem makes the reader think also of their own family lives.  Nice write.


 

 

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