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I hate the way I worry
about every little thing
I hate the way I'm terrified
of what your fate might bring
I hate that I think you hate me
at times when I need you most
I hate it that I feel so distant
when I really want to be close
I hate the way I talk to you
when I'm angry or when I'm sad
I hate how it's hard to understand me
and how I seem to make you feel bad
I hate the way I make you feel
like nothing but ugly dirt
I hate that I can't control it
and how it makes me hurt
I hate how some things I can't tell you
cause I know the problems they'd cause
I hate that I used to tell you everything
and now that's come to a pause
I hate it how sometimes
I can't tell you how i feel
and I hate how when i used to
you made it sound unreal
Most of all I hate it
that I wrote this about you
because despite all that's been said and done
I still really love you.
The title of this poem drew me in. I can't believe my eyes. To be so young and in love, is awesome. I love this poem. I love that you did the "10 things I hate about you" approach. It's just awesome. This poem rules. And is so bitter-sweet and so surreal.
Joe~
hey, mine name is kay.. i got the link to your site from my friends guest book. I really lovee this poem. its great and you expressed yourself brilliantly. Keep writing, you deffinitely got something going for you:) if you ever get bored, check out my site, and if not thats alright too lol. But i liked this poem a lot. Great job. -kay-
love it.. the 10 things i hate about you poem variation hehe.. very nice and i can definetley relate to a love/hate relationship.. keep writing cuz you're awesome
<3 mel