Shine, Shine
Oh how I love you
You make me happy
On lousy days
You will never understand
Sweet Sunshine
How much I do
My love is constant
Forever beaming
In your ember rays
Of Pulp Fiction and solar eclipses
The first time
Is always funny
Who would have known? (I did)
Who would have known? (I did)
That first hit
Would get me (I did)
Get my head spinning (I did)
Would start hallucinating (I did)
About talking flowers (I....did?)
Man!
Ya got me on some cockamamy, self-induced, passionate, Alice in Wonderland overload explosion shit!
And you don't have the slightest clue...
"shine"
How much all
"shine"
It means to me
Sweet,
Sweet Sun
shine,
Sweet Sunshine..shine...sweet
...shine..shine sweetly....
And don't ever stop!
Exploit me lover!
Before I lose you
Exploit me
While I still continue..
To overdose in
Your Pure Sunshine injections
"You are my sunshine,
My only sunshine,
You make me happy,
Please don't ever go away."
Goovy!
Goovy!
i like this alot, the imagery and use of stanza structure are cool artistic effects
id like to see more of a coherent line of thought that i can follow though, like im reading images in ur mind, that would be cool
great works tho, thanks for the comment, sorry it took so long to get back!