Lots of rain and little sun
Season is changing it starting to warm
im a bud on a tree, i can't wait to bloom
there's millions of us, all sizes and shapes
we bless u colors, beauty and shade
when it starts getting cold, I fall from the sky
iv lived long enough, it's my turn to fly.
Like this
KS
Hey, I am a proponent of
Hey, I am a proponent of spelling
so if a work
makes me work harder than necessary to understand the context I generally dismiss the poem all together
editing is part of the process
that said you could be a great poet if you tried to be a great poet
not judging just saying
I like your poems
I DON'T LIKE TWEETING POEMS
OLD FASHION THAT WAY I GUESS!!!
Peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot
Nice Poem
I am "...a bud on a tree..." too. Loved: "...we bless u colors..." :D ~allets~