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Warm evening - bright flash

Pin point punches through blackness

A single firefly

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Re-write 9/5/06

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 4:33pm
©5 September 2006 - 8:49pm — fliptop
6 October 2006 - 3:51pm — S74rw4rd
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This version seems more powerful!

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