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Paper Love
You are the love of my life
I give you my endless love
I am your paper love
You can tear me up
You can put me aside and throw me away
I am your origami
you can shape me into anything you want
Every word I say to you is special and memorable like a child's first
Why can't you be more like that?
I will love you till my last breathe
I will love you till all my corners are bent
Great poem. It's a shame but
Great poem. It's a shame but I'm sure a lot of people can relate.
Sometimes we just want to give it all to somebody, even if it means we are destoryed. Great analogy. Love it.
:)
I think as writers we are doomed to want to give it all even if it gets us hurt, to start with we are expressive, but even beyond that we always know the best poetry comes from the deepest feelings so we tend to wane towrads deeper feelings. And as humans we tend to want to be wanted, and often treat love very black and white, in or out, there or not, so giving all just makes sense I guess.
Much Love
Ashley
I love this poem! The pen's reply....
I will love you till our ink has faded and I am transpartnet like lace
till you can see through me and know everything about me
how my atoms combine
I will love you even when you forget me in a pile on your desk and spend your evenings penning better things
I will love you until my creases tear and I am pieces of confetti thrown to the wind to make you smile
I will love you
I will love
I will fold in your hands like prayers sent to God
I will be your paper love
So write me
like the poem I am
and I will absord you like the poet you are
Much Love
Ashley
Oh you, always leaving the
Oh you, always leaving the best comments.
:)
aw thanks
Much Love
Ashley
WoW~ Ashley!!! you certainly
WoW~ Ashley!!! you certainly pulled a wabbit out of that!!!! :D wonderous!!!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
:)
thanks love
its a reflection of Fitz, his words are that impacting they inspire more ripples...or folds ;)
Much Love
Ashley
ahhhhhh.......Lovely words on
ahhhhhh.......Lovely words on paper.....
Oh my Gosh!?
This is so incredibly beautiful! This absolutely gorgeously written! So many lovely ideas float around my mind ! The open ideas of the poem is Amazing letting the reader provide the context love the last line!!! ")
Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow
I'm still loving this!
Intently... Inspiring write! :)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
:)
I really enjoyed this. Keep up the good work. Loved it. :)
Kristi a.k.a Jordan
Really good poem! I can so
Really good poem! I can so relate.
Keep up the good work
Ashley Cote
Nope it's not.. Quick fix.
Nope it's not.. Quick fix. Thanks for the catch!
It's a great piece :)
It's a great piece :)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Lovely, that last line is
Lovely, that last line is that meant to be that way? Just making sure I get the right read, cheers SS.
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
great work here - keep writin
great work here - keep writin
Thank you very much
Thank you very much
I was someone's paper love..
I was someone's paper love.. lovely poem!
Thank you
Thank you
I know how this feels...
I know how this feels...
please read my poems, and enjoy the real-life drama that is my life!
Thanks for reading. Im sure
Thanks for reading. Im sure everyone will eventually be in this position
Fitz - I Liked All The Lines Equally
The paper imagery is nice, the sentiment a bit altruistic but to save the day, she is also admonished to be the same, which may lead to love everlasting - ah to dream. You made me dream - that is difficult to do, poet. "...I am your origami..." Insert scream here! Cool write - Lady A