To him once, a whole world unseen
And one unheard to her;
Yet somehow, they touched by fate
Their worlds changed forever.
Together they rose and fell,
As their worlds laughed and wept.
For Promises, not to be broken
Were always meant to be kept.
Ages later, once darkness fell
And deafening silence arose...
Scattered petals mattered no more,
Teardrops in their tracks, froze.
Separated, they wept and fell,
And without a word, they left
For Promises were meant to be broken
Never meant to be kept.
Awesome job!
Wow, I love it !
Just droped in to say . I
Just droped in to say . I like the hell out of it , And I don't like anything ! lol
Damn Good indeed !
Every story-teller bends the myth to his own purpose. that's why a Hero has a thousand faces
"Scattered petals mattered no
"Scattered petals mattered no more,"
love the poem, especially the way the time frame feels so ambiguous, to me at least. Adds another element ;-)
Oh Mayukh I'm very happy to see this poem of yours on the Fav Li
Oh Mayukh I'm very happy to see this poem of yours on the Fav List.Congratulations !!! ~Very best wishes for a happy Durga Puja~
©bishu
I'm almost scared.. this poem
I'm almost scared.. this poem resonated with one I wrote.
It's called roses. I'm almost worried that.. well I need to let you read it.
Make me remember my dreams
haha... nice co-incidence
haha... nice co-incidence there :)
nothing to be worried abt really :) maybe we just wrote from the same mindset, that's why. hopefully we can collaborate in d future :D
n sure, i'll read it. is it on pp yet??
Very well written. Loved
Very well written. Loved this. Post some more.
please read my poems, and enjoy the real-life drama that is my life!
will do. thanx 4 d
will do. thanx 4 d appreciation :)