Theres a wall here ---
It's seperating us now
I can't reach for you
I don't even know how.
Theres a cracked memory here ---
Oh, how I longed to be like you
My own mind corrupted by my fear
My fear; of never getting to you.
Theres a message here ---
It's saying it's goodbye
It's goodbye to this life
Misery won't visit you tonight.
Theres a meaning here ---
A meaning to all this madness
She just wanted a chance
To rid herself of this sadness.
Theres a mirror here ---
It's so hard to believe
That this mirror of seperation
Was seperating myself from me.
baby this is amazing. its kinda ironic and just plain good writing. i love the metaphores and its just great lol
I love the irony of this poem. It's serverity is crucial to its mood. Amazing, dear. You captured it flawlessly.