Broken Theory

I was confused and lost.

Looking for peace at any cost.

I asked you what I should do.

And what you told me was true.

It was my choice to choose the path,

I had to stop living under other people's wrath.

Stop giving thought to ideas that aren't my own.

We have to go on alone.

Our lives in this world are only for rent.

So enjoy how your time is spent.

Enough abiding but others rules,

Make your own and show those fools.

Be done playing with this broken theory,

Be done living life so weary.

If he's anything like real family,

He'll be there for you, no matter crisi.

You were right all a long.

But I was sure you were going to be wrong.

Now you're leaving

And I'm grieving.

Taking your own advice,

You tell me very precise.

I'm removing myself from this place.

A wave of pain swept over my face.

I lose you too?

This mustn't be true.

You were the best of them all.

So I let my tears fall.

In your name I cry.

Missing you I heave a large sigh.

Goodbye my friend

My memory of you shall never end.

-Exkai Jade Satiro-

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Because of and for Kitcho.
I do listen to you..
Your advice gets me through.. Or I should say got me through...
Thank you Kitcho. <3.

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Afzal Shauq's picture

its a good theoritical hypotheses done in poetic way... rich idea and lovely poem..love it very much ... well done dear friend.. hope you never stop writing poems and sweet words