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Save Me Or Get Away
fear overwhelms those who linger in the dark
so run for the light to the gun who start
the shadows of all of yesterday
tend to follow along the way
along the dark hallway
which door do u choose
the wrong one could cause u to lose...
your life is my life
her life is my lie
no one can see it
my innocence
demons are my spirit
monsters are my soul
the evil in me thrive
feeding off the cold...
to the broken bones of the past
and the fractures of the future
compare these to emotional
and see whose the loser
none of u can see me
ghost from the past
think Envy dear
the pain cannot last...
your life is my life
her life is my lie
no one can see it
my innocence
demons are my spirit
monsters are my soul
the evil in me thrive
feeding off the cold...
you cant hear me....
I'm to far away
from humanity
devils taken over me
cant help me?
get away
your life is no longer mine...
her life is always my lie...
no one will ever see me...
and my angel..my innocence
demons will control me
monsters will guide me
the evil in me stays there
continuing to breed
cant save me...get away
Some really great individual
Some really great individual lines in here! Wow! The first stanza needs work, Ot dent quote make sense, but the last two stanzas are gold! Keep up the good work!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
i have no idea what ur saying
i have no idea what ur saying by stanzas. i dont kno any poetic terms or anything i just write how i feel. some words and phrases can be confusing to people who read my poems but it describes how i feel.
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