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Helpless
some things cannot be saved
like the soul from which floated from the grave
hollow as is this is my thoughts
turn back now or fear to be shot
by the ghost soul heartache heat
burn pain without me beat
the cheap lies that brought me here today
no longer work my strength gave way
long ago i was an angel in the clouds
fallen to the ground is a burden
hell is soon cant love me learn
love God don't be anti
got the love in your heart
use the lullaby
put my soul to rest
so i may haunt the messed
wicked am i for loving the dark
escape from my love the cloak
of the strong smell of smoke
who choke all of the emotions
until there are none
but the pain of knowing
only you are my sun
but dark u are
i will fix u
or go to hell with u
Wow! This could be a really
Wow! This could be a really great poem if you go back a read it carefully and add some grammar to help readers understand how it is said. I love thelast 6 lines I think they are verywell written! What's there is very good but it can be great! I have a problem with grammar and spelling but it is getting better pm me if you need some advice anytime cheers SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
words that seem random
words that seem random describe how i am feeling about the subject or how i feel when i write. all of the things going thru my mind and the words make since when put together.
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